Most of my comments do not seem to be contained in any theme.
This does not seem like an essay where material can be researched. No one is telling me where the out of bounds start. Just seem to be wandering around looking at different things.
It seemed so much easier when the topic was chosen for me. Then I would look up five different sources. Check to see what their presuppositions were, organize the notes into points, write an introduction, three points and a conclusion.
Now, it is like a soccer field with no lines and no goal posts. Just a bunch of people wandering around occasionally hitting the ball.